The top of the page says "Sort-of Chicago-like Poem."
I suspect that the meter, rhyme, and structure of the poem are not original (I think it was an assignment to write a poem in a certain style), but the words are mine.
I don't know whether I wrote this in High School or Junior High...
I have replicated my original spelling and punctuation. :)
My House
Character shaper for my family
Warm comforter for my soul
Needed place to belong (for everyone)
Lift up when I'm down
Warm, kind, inviting
A place just for ME!
The world cries "abandon, abandon" I shout, "no,
I will not."
I will not."
They scream "No children, be free instead" But my
soul yearns for these things so I reply "no, I will not."
soul yearns for these things so I reply "no, I will not."
No matter what they say, I will not be deter[r]ed from
my path, I am strong "No, I will not."
my path, I am strong "No, I will not."
When the world says "individual" and my God says
"families" who do I chose?
"families" who do I chose?
When the world says "it's okay" but my God says
"Abstinence" who do I chose?
"Abstinence" who do I chose?
Who do I chose? My God of course, for the world and
its fancies are the sand that goes in and out with
the tide, but my God is the redwood tree that
can not be moved.
its fancies are the sand that goes in and out with
the tide, but my God is the redwood tree that
can not be moved.
You say "there are so many problems, just give up" I say
"I know, Nevertheless, I will not."
"I know, Nevertheless, I will not."
...
We have to stay linked arm in arm, lifting and
supporting, loving and cherishing or else.
supporting, loving and cherishing or else.
there is no hope.
"No, I will not"
It is too vital "No, I will not."






I'm glad to find out about my sweet Sara on your blog. I love you....glad things are going well and you're so happy.
ReplyDeleteThis is an absolutely awesome poem! You always were (and are) soooooo clever!
I love you...Love Mom